[evolvis-commits] r8247: More small tweaks↵?==?UTF-8?Q?

mirabilos at evolvis.org mirabilos at evolvis.org
Thu Feb 24 16:37:33 CET 2011


Author: mirabilos
Date: 2011-02-24 16:37:33 +0100 (Thu, 24 Feb 2011)
New Revision: 8247

Modified:
   trunk/gforge_base/evolvisforge-5.1/gforge/docs/xdocs/xdocs/introduction.xml
Log:
More small tweaks


Modified: trunk/gforge_base/evolvisforge-5.1/gforge/docs/xdocs/xdocs/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/gforge_base/evolvisforge-5.1/gforge/docs/xdocs/xdocs/introduction.xml	2011-02-24 15:37:31 UTC (rev 8246)
+++ trunk/gforge_base/evolvisforge-5.1/gforge/docs/xdocs/xdocs/introduction.xml	2011-02-24 15:37:33 UTC (rev 8247)
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
       <p>
 <!--<img src="/images/logo.png"/>-->
 <p/>
-GForge is a software for collaborative development for the software community. It provides a full configured development system with versioning, a project web site and tools for comunication between members of a development team.  The tools provided by GForge allows team members to comunicate and organize their work; this allows the creation of a  knowledgebase.
+GForge is a software for collaborative development for the software community. It provides a full configured development system with versioning, a project web site and tools for comunication between members of a development team.  The tools provided by GForge allows team members to comunicate and organize their work; this allows the creation of a knowledgebase.
 </p><p>
 A complete configurated GForge system will give you the following features:
 
@@ -30,11 +30,11 @@
 For discussions between team members
 </li>
 <li><b>Bug tracking</b><br/>
-Allows to register and administer the bugs of the software
+Allow registration and administration of bugs
 </li>
-<li><b>support request, patch submissions, enhancement requests</b><br/>
+<li><b>Support requests, patch submissions, and enhancement requests</b><br/>
 </li>
-<li><b>comunication between project members using mailing lists</b><br/>
+<li><b>Comunication between project members using mailing lists</b><br/>
 </li>
 <li><b>Sharing of documentation</b><br/>
 </li>
@@ -43,13 +43,11 @@
 <li><b>File uploads/releases</b><br/>
 </li>
 <li><b>Posting of news</b><br/>
-Every project can have his own news items.
+Every project can have its own news items.
 </li>
 <li><b>Code Snippets</b><br/>
-The Code Snippet library allows the creation of a basic knowledgebase. The Code Snippet Library can contain code fragments, howto, etc.
+Provides of a basic knowledgebase that can contain code fragments, HOWTOs, etc.
 </li>
-<li><b>Classification of projects</b><br/>
-</li>
 </ol>
 </li>
 
@@ -94,8 +92,6 @@
 </li>
 </ul>
 
-
-
 </p>
 
 </section>



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